‘Lone did the sun set
Amidst sepulchral silence,
I too alone sat.
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Haiku | 13.12.2017 |
EXCELLENT write in three lines. Loved the image that you vividly depicted in this amazing haiku. I always like to see when the sun is about to set its glory. It creates a feeling of sadness and isolation. Yet, sometimes there is beauty in being alone especially when you are with nature Brilliant write with superb imagery..10++++
Sun sets silently and gives amazing effect of silent mood. This poem is very brilliantly penned.10
You are right Kumarmani Mahakul, Nature works silently and that makes an immense impact on us. Thank you so much.
Thank you so much Mohammed Nehal, I too had liked the Haiku. A poet is like a mother that loves all her brood, but she too is human and sometimes has a preference.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you Rose Marie. I admire your knack of picking up poems for appreciation if they deserve.