Silent With My Feelings Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Silent With My Feelings

Rating: 5.0


‘Lone did the sun set
Amidst sepulchral silence,
I too alone sat.
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Haiku | 13.12.2017 |

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 14 March 2019

Thank you Rose Marie. I admire your knack of picking up poems for appreciation if they deserve.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 March 2019

EXCELLENT write in three lines. Loved the image that you vividly depicted in this amazing haiku. I always like to see when the sun is about to set its glory. It creates a feeling of sadness and isolation. Yet, sometimes there is beauty in being alone especially when you are with nature Brilliant write with superb imagery..10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2019

Sun sets silently and gives amazing effect of silent mood. This poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2019

You are right Kumarmani Mahakul, Nature works silently and that makes an immense impact on us. Thank you so much.

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M Asim Nehal 11 March 2019

Great imagery and fantastic haiku 10++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2019

Thank you so much Mohammed Nehal, I too had liked the Haiku. A poet is like a mother that loves all her brood, but she too is human and sometimes has a preference.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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