Silken Thread Poem by Annette Aitken

Really nice work, very is beauty in everything if you look hard enough.

Yeah the silken thread looks is beautiful and it catches the fly too like a web. Nice work. Keep inking.

I love this one, I love it! ! ! One wrong step..your futures told! ! ! A ten most well deserved. You just inspired me to write a poem along a similar line of thought, wonderful! ! !

Wonderful work and a joy to read. Spiders webs are a work of art in their beauty and construction.

Luring ist prey! ! Nice work.

here is how it is about to go into the showcase, with my Bri's Note. bri :) - - - - - - - - - - 25. by Annette Aitken Silken Thread Each silken thread woven with grace shining, enticing luring its prey A welcome sign in crystal illumination hynotising with precision unsuspecting passersby the silken thread will catch their eye This silken thread all paved with gold one wrong step your future's told. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bri's note: With Annette's permission, I made some 'corrections' to her spelling etc. She admits spelling is not her strong area. I DID find that in U.K. there is a different spelling for hynotising, so I've left that, although I 'mistakenly' nudged Annette into changing it from hypnotising to the American/Canadian spelling, hynotizing, on her poem's page. Damn language differences! ! ! :) ================ bri ;)

oops! i somehow managed to send my comment before it was finished (see below) . - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - here is the rest of it. .................a showcase for PH poets for July 2016. one wrong step .................one day i did something like that; i stepped right where a dog had been squatting! - - - - - - - - - - - - your's is a deadly story indeed! bri :) thanks.

i think some of what i call misspellings are just the British spellings. we Americans, OF COURSE, have different (BETTER!) spellings for some words. i really like the poem. nasty spider! ha ha this shall adorn my/OUR