Silver Rain Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Silver Rain

Rating: 5.0

I have been counting my tears,
watching as your memory fades like
thick, dark, and foreboding clouds that once blotted out the sun.
Now, every falling drop is pierced
by sudden beams of light.

I am no longer drowning in the dark.
I count my tears as silver rain,
releasing the hurts
once buried in my heart.
With every drop,
the dark recedes,
until the window of my soul is cleansed--
paving the way for a sky
that finally knows its own
significance and radiance.

Copyright 2026, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 16 March 2026

"until the window of my soul is cleansed"

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Timber Koleden 16 March 2026

Thank you so much for sharing again!

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Timber Koleden 16 March 2026

I love the sun piercing the clouds imagery! And 'silver tears' puts such a vivid picture of tears of healing into my head! So well written!

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Timber Koleden 16 March 2026

Silver tears! Dazzling imagery employed so cunningly throughout this picturesque piece! I have found that tears can heal indeed!

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Isadora Quagmire 15 March 2026

Brilliant and beautiful piece! May God give you peace and healing dear friend, thank you for sharing this fine work! Take care : )

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Rebecca Navarre 30 March 2026

I count my tears as silver rain, releasing the hurts....+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 March 2026

Ever so meaningful and heart felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 March 2026

It's tough to work through the pain and tears... : ) Thank you for this Inspiring poem! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 30 March 2026

Ever so deeply beautiful! ... With every drop, the dark recedes...

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Anjandev Roy 18 March 2026

Magnificent representation as usual.... thanks for sharing....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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