Sir Lorin Poem by Deborah Cromer

Sir Lorin

Rating: 5.0


The first time we saw each other face to face
You asked for a hug and in your arms I found my place
Just in the first 10 minutes of being together with you
I knew that you were special, rare and one of the few

Your smile warmed my heart, and I loved your voice
Instant attraction and strong connection, I had no choice
Looking at me in a certain way, your eyebrow cocked to one side
I immediately trusted you, and had no reason to ever hide

I remember you came closer, I saw you beautiful and fine
Placing yourself closer still, your mouth and lips right next to mine
For a moment my heart held its breath, and missed a beat
In silent prayer I thanked God for that moment so sweet

You kissed me, soft and slow, our lips barely feeling
1 kiss,2 kiss,3 little kisses to send my world reeling
Your smile melted my heart as you looked into my eyes
I felt desire that grows strong forever and never dies

Blessed with your touch, I welcomed your perfect hugs
I learned a passion that on the mind pulls and tugs
Was I dreaming or was this a dream come true
I knew in our first meeting I could spend forever with you

After you left my world completely changed form
Colors were brighter, I felt comfortable, soft and warm
I found new meaning for everything, life had magical touch
Thank you Sir Lorin for setting me free, I needed this so much

Wednesday, April 20, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

This sounds like something special, so special that it stays with you forever. Beautiful Write Deborah! (see The Fountain) in my writes. -Kelly.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 August 2012

oh what a write of love of passion breath when flecks to fire wind, simply beautiful write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2012

A beautiful love confession that clearly shows your Beauty and Talent! It is well crafted and poignant! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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