Slip..... Poem by Valerie Dohren

Slip.....

Rating: 5.0


Slip into my fantasy
Walk into my dream
Clasp my hand in paradise
‘Neath a soft sunbeam

Touch me as a summer breeze
Gentle on my face
Keep me close against your heart
Warm in your embrace

Slide into my memory
So I’ll ne’er forget
Linger there within my mind
That I shall not fret

Step into my glist’ning eyes
Greet me with your smile
Feel my gaze upon your face
Tarry there awhile

Hold onto my shadow cast
Never set me free
Wrap me in your tender love
Through eternity

Journey deep into my soul
Find the love that’s there
Joined together, two as one
All our life to share

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Owusu 15 April 2013

a love and feeling i hope to share with someone special one day, a beautiful poem as always

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Neela Nath Das 14 April 2013

So tender is love, so smooth are your diction. Like feathers they touch my soul!

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Mary Forrester 14 April 2013

Such a beautiful poem Valerie.

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Unwritten Soul 13 April 2013

You are the summer breeze that warm our smiles, a lovely write again for sure! _Soul

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Captain Cur 13 April 2013

As beautiful as a wave cresting on the ocean.... wave after wave.....

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Aria Siren 28 May 2013

From what I gather, your style is soft like opaque sunbeams and always carried in a tone of dignity. Beautiful

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John Brown 22 April 2013

Beautiful Val, as always.

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Hazel Durham 16 April 2013

Soothing, mellow and full of wonderful enchantment! Beautiful write!

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David Wood 16 April 2013

Another beautiful poem Valerie and a joy to read.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 16 April 2013

The tender love and the manner you have portrayed it with lovely rhyming scheme is greatly alluring, Valerie! KUDOS!

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