Slow Down, Baby Poem by Kaede Rirunaru

Slow Down, Baby

Rating: 5.0


I don't know why you smiling,
In this shining morning,
Then you ask me for drinking,
And both of us order Darjeeling,

Then afternoon you calling my phone,
Ask me to telling my home,
Then you knock my door when you come,
I'm shock cause you bringing a flower,

Then tonight when we have dinner,
I just can't move when you saying it's love,
But, helloww... you even don't know my full name!
You holding and trying to kiss, but I must stop these,

'Not now, Baby...'
Holding and kissing is not that easy to do it,
Then makin' love it's not the way to proof the affection,
Why you in hurry? Time still running...

'Slow down, Baby...'
If you really want me then you must know about me,
If you really love me then you must be so patiently,
Love is a river then we must keep flowing,
If you want me to standing in beside you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Min Sia 08 December 2008

Yes..exactly..perfectly address my dearest friend..empathizing.. Let him read this wonderful poem..for this is the reality of ladies..men should come to discover! A 10+++! ! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 December 2008

love is a river. I like this words! keep writing!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 December 2008

Love is passion; touchin, kissin and makin love are components of love.there's nothin wrong with it.Nice writes Naru.

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Kite Remedy 09 December 2008

yeah, you're right. love is not an instant thing, but more a flower whose petals will bloom in a period of time. patience is the very key. good write..

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Kaede Yes, that's what is all about, getting to know the person otherwise a relationship is empty. You really did well with the title and what followed. Excellent! Karin Anderson

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Aijaz Asif 09 December 2008

another lovely write from you dear....as far as i believe, love is not the name of taking....its giving, waiting, hurting, yearning.....thanks for sharing 10+++ 'when she comes the birds and flowers will sing a song when she comes the clouds and skies will drizzle love all around when, when, when someday or maybe never'-asif rgds asif

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Kaede Rirunaru

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Surabaya, Indonesia
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