Friday, September 7, 2012

Small Wonder Comments

Rating: 5.0

She broke her collar-bone
in a soccer game, meant for fun.
She's so tough and fearless, at times.
So small and fragile, at others.
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Smoky Hoss
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Chris Blazo 03 October 2012

What a great poem. I don't have any kids, but I can still see the love in this. A true and real write. Thanks for sharing.

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Chuck Audette 21 September 2012

Love it! Mine is 5, but amazes me daily. -c

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Nurain Ali-balogun 18 September 2012

Love for your daughter is just as strong as it was expressed. Lovely is the word for it.

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Dave Walker 18 September 2012

Like it, my daughter is four and just started main school, I always worry, but it's our job to worry for the next fifty years. A fantastic poem.

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Joseph Anderson 10 September 2012

I believe she has great feelings for you, but someday we lose them as they move into their new life.A warm, tender and emotive write-strong and so supportive

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Valerie Dohren 08 September 2012

Very sweet and endearing - we all love our children.

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Heather Wilson 07 September 2012

So beautiful, the love of a father is so special, a really lovely poem.

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