Smile Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Smile

Rating: 4.9


When the moon smiles,
Even the darkest clouds
Cannot cover her shine.
They make way
For her to be seen
By many admiring eyes.

So keep smiling, if you may,
The clouds will go away!
Even if there be any,
Your beams will reach
An ardent admirer somewhere,
Anyway!


Dhaka
13 March 2016
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Sunday, March 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Loaded with love and pregnant with positivity. A smile indeed can remove dark clouds and shine like the sun. Well done my friend!

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Khairul Ahsan 26 May 2020

Thank you, @Howard The Motivational Poet Simon. Much inspired by your generous appreciation.

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Clarence Prince 31 March 2016

It is good to smile, it is exercise for the face! When the moon smiles, Even the darkest clouds, Cannot cover her shine Well said, Khairul!

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Khairul Ahsan 02 April 2016

@ Clarence, Prince, Thanks for reading my poem and appreciating it. Your kind words mean a lot to me.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 23 March 2016

Simple poem with positive message :) Nice

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Khairul Ahsan 02 April 2016

@ Niken Kusuma Wardani, Thanks for your positive appreciation of my poem. I am inspired by your kind words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2016

With the joy of your heart! Caring for others as well. Nice work.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 March 2016

@ Edward Kofi Louis, Thank you very much for reading my poem so soon after it was posted. Thanks for your kind words too. Am much inspired by your appreciation of the poem.

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