Smog Everywhere Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Smog Everywhere

Rating: 5.0


Shadowed by smog
The trees stand apart
Bricks and walls
Between every communication
As words shape onto the page
Lettering into a confession
Smog sails into the mood
Like a ghost lurking around
Every happiness
To clamp down on celebration
Like the security force
Of a dictator
Smog surrounds the city
Hovers over the meetings
Steals into private rooms
Builds walls between lovers
I want to meet you in November
But smog is between us
Smog of doubt
Smog of confusion
Smog of distrust
Smog of delusion.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 November 2022

Smog everywhere in everything. Liked the way you have expressed things.5 stars.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 November 2022

I love it Wonderful write Top 5

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"The smog is between us/smog of doubt…" fantastic, Nosheen. The smog enveloping cities towns and villages is nothing. It is the smog that divide people that matters.. lovely take…

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Congratulations, Nosheen! This excellent poem in ranked among The Best Poems of Members featured on PoemHunter. A most deserving recognition. All the best Friend.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 November 2022

Like a ghost lurking around... wonderful. It gives me immense pleasure to revisit this wonderful poem dear poetess Nosheen. Stay blessed.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 November 2022

Full score for this enigmatic smog. To my favourite too.........

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 November 2022

Smog of doubt, confusion, distrust, delusion of man while the smog of November creeps into each life.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 November 2022

Dear Nosheen, i have never read such a beautiful poem - smog of nature compared to smog of life.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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