So Will You Shine Poem by Nosheen Irfan
So Will You Shine
A rainbow glows
when the storm clouds go
like a hope flaring
from the dying embers
though you are far
and out of sight
but look the sun
shines warm and bright
so will you shine
in my dreams as mine
where I hold stars
a million of them in my arms.
Nosheen Irfan © 2016
A true poem on hopes........This is will inspire millions to stay focused and never loose hope....10+++
Hi Nosheen, Loved reading the poem. A rainbow glows when the storm clouds go like a hope flaring from the dying embers. Great!
Sight, light! Through you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Rainbow glows like life glows in dream or in reality. Light of life shines interestingly. Holding stars in arms sparks love. Nice piece of work.! ...10
Two images of hope open the poem: sunlight and embers flaring up. Both happen automatically and without human action needed. So I'm assuming this emotional hope will have the same quality of reliable fulfillment! ! We can at least hope the hope is genuine. The brevity of this poem is part of its meaning: You've stated their case. now you have to fall silent while destiny, the good angel, a happy coincidence - one of these things - takes over and performs the necessary operations to make THE SHINING happen! !
Your poetry shines like gentle gems glowing for us all to be illuminated in a little more beauty, a little more grace, a little more artistic grace. Bravo. :)
Beautiful write. You have cast your magic with words once again in this short, crisp poem. (10)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 11:58:31 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I am sure that any man would be lucky to be your dream and in your arms.