So close to your soul
On this lonely night
Mourning sun awaits
Nice poem with philosophical undertone, A soulful journey towards the end.5****
Very much appreciate your understanding of this poem, my friend! Asim, your constructive criticism is ALWAYS very much appreciated! Thank You for taking the time to do that!
I have never seen 'Mourning Sun' what for it Mourns? If you meant by Solar eclipse it may make some sense.
Give it some meaningful thought...it will make sense to you. I never ever write ANY poems that I don't give lots of thought to! Poetic Sky, I value your opinion and love your poetry. You are one of the poets that will continue to raise many stars!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The human soul long for love and hungers when it is empty, particularly on a lonely night, but I wouldn't like to see a mourning sun.
Love your very insightful coment, David!