So Close To Your Soul - 1 Poem by Richard Wlodarski

So Close To Your Soul - 1

Rating: 5.0


So close to your soul
On this lonely night
Mourning sun awaits

Monday, June 5, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
SO CLOSE TO YOUR SOUL series is my adventures with personal and professional relationships in my life. I predict that it will surpass my most successful series, POETRY WROTE ME!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 05 June 2023

The human soul long for love and hungers when it is empty, particularly on a lonely night, but I wouldn't like to see a mourning sun.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 June 2023

Love your very insightful coment, David!

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M. Asim Nehal 05 June 2023

Nice poem with philosophical undertone, A soulful journey towards the end.5****

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Richard Wlodarski 05 June 2023

Very much appreciate your understanding of this poem, my friend! Asim, your constructive criticism is ALWAYS very much appreciated! Thank You for taking the time to do that!

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Poetic Sky 05 June 2023

I have never seen 'Mourning Sun' what for it Mourns? If you meant by Solar eclipse it may make some sense.

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Richard Wlodarski 05 June 2023

Give it some meaningful thought...it will make sense to you. I never ever write ANY poems that I don't give lots of thought to! Poetic Sky, I value your opinion and love your poetry. You are one of the poets that will continue to raise many stars!

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