So very sad
That once so loved
Now out of heart
And in no mind
Nicely articulated. Love is a great feeling- we enjoy every bit of it when in the company of someone close to our heart but becomes a lasting pain when we are betrayed. Thanks, Richard.
Thank you, Rajnish for thinking that it's nicely articulated. And for your insightful positive feedback.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So amazingly done, Richard. Again...it is all in that last line. Is it madness? Despair? Emotional numbing? So many possibilities. Well done, Richard.
Yup, I like keeping them in suspense. M.J., thanks for your positive insightful feedback.