! ! ! ! ! ! ! *soliloquy *! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! *soliloquy *! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


vernal whisper glints in mango grove
leaf sways stooping over jingling tone
melancholy scribbled by ink of mystery
i am yet not stranger by the hiatus feel

sun wishes the grin by the warmth
gleams of light bestirs to green
crawling baby may fall again
never yet loses courage to stand again.

ripple reels through breeze
storm yet shatters hanging nest
bird still sings by lone voices
as room of warmth in the next home......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Sisson 17 December 2008

Great imagination! Good Write!

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Lynda Robson 17 December 2008

Great imagery in this write, thanks for sharing it with us all, well done Lynda 10

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Linda Moore 15 December 2008

Always going forward, I really like the elegance of your poems.....10 Peace and Love, Linda

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 15 December 2008

A very Brilliant and pituresque write that brings many viisions to a readers mind... I truly enjoyed this piece my Good friend! Thank U so much for putting pen to paper and bringing us an Excellent Read! God Bless

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Mamta Agarwal 15 December 2008

first of all i must say you have a way with words- wordsmith. that said, while talking ourselves out of our melancholic thoughts, we do manage to find inner strength and nature is a big teacher, if we are aware and mindful. through unusual imagery, you have conveyed a powerful message and strength of chracter.10 Mamta

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Ruth Walters 12 April 2009

Very descriptive, well written and thought out.

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Ronell Warren Alman 20 January 2009

Very well written. These helps the reader understand that the world sometimes can be very unkind!

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C. P. Sharma 05 January 2009

A rhythmic soul searching soliloquy with melting aliterations adding to its beauty. Enjoyed the read.

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Ramesh T A 21 December 2008

Indeed it is a meaningful soliloquy to muse over to feel the painful pleasure of life in the human world!

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Alison Cassidy 21 December 2008

I'm sure young Hamlet would be inspired by your words. Colours, sounds and emotional highs and lows combine with nature to produce a work that transforms the reader. A beautiful piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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