Rating: 5.0
How did I come to know—
these lonely feeling
that I thought that only others felt?
I thought I loved you well enough
to keep you—from running
and to what—I know not where?

You were my only dream—
now bubble in the sky of make-believe
somewhere around my only thoughts
of what used to be—the sum of us

How did I come to be alone?
surviving in this empty space
do I still breath?
but barely in my mind

And what will I become
without, the you I love?

I ask—but why?
Sunday, May 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lonely
Keith Brown 25 April 2020
Nice poem, we are becoming isolated let’s hope not from love
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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2020
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Stan.
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Steve Howard 13 June 2018
Sentiment artfully expressed. Nice :)
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Stan, such a well expressed poem??????
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Carl Roussell 20 May 2018
I think the line, You were my only dream— now bubble in the sky of make-believe truly conveys the isolation you are feeling. Very good poem.
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