Some Days Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Some Days

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Some days I'm feeling fine,
Some days I'm blue,
Some days I'm happy,
I hope you are too,
There's not a single day I breathe,
When your not on my mind,
Maybe the past,
Should be left behind.
I try and I try,
But you're with me every day,
Some day I'll see you,
I hope and I pray.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 25 May 2022

This life is true for all. But your poem reflects optimism.

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Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment x Much appreciated!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 May 2022

Jayne, i really appreciate the thought you have cheered my up bravo!

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Thank you LeeAnn x I'm so glad it has x

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Kim Barney 24 May 2022

We all have some days when we feel happier than others, but we can CHOOSE to be happy, believe it or not. I like the way you closed the poem.

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Thank you! I really appreciate your comments x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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