Wednesday, August 23, 2023

Somebody Loved Me Once Comments

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I can't remember who,
but think it wasn't you.
Somebody loved me once;
I think that statement's true.
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Belle Wassermeister
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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2023

An excellent Anaphora. I have enjoyed tremendously

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Belle Wassermeister 31 August 2023

Thank you, Sylvia. You have taught me a new word. I had to look up 'Anaphora' to see what it was.

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 August 2023

When the mask fall all that is left is regret confusion and pain. Very touchy poem

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Belle Wassermeister 31 August 2023

Thank you for the comment, Aarzoo.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2023

Wonderful. Loved these lines: You were my hero once; oh, I was such a dunce! Your stupid fall from grace was written on your face.

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Belle Wassermeister 31 August 2023

Thank you, Dillip, for commenting.

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Bharati Nayak 25 August 2023

The poem depicts the emotional turmoil when someone discovers that the person he/she loved and put faith turns out such a rogoue! Your feelings were true and you can not accept the fact the person you loved is really not what he seems.

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Belle Wassermeister 28 August 2023

What a nice comment, Bharati. Thank you so much!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 August 2023

Linda this is a great poem TFS Encore! ! I miss you

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Belle Wassermeister 28 August 2023

Dearest friend LeeAnn, thank you for commenting.

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