Someone Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Someone

Rating: 5.0


With the string of eyes
"Someone" is flying my heart like kite…

In this unknown world
"Someone" is looking like gold

Thoughts hardly used to cross my mind
Now "Someone" is making it pass between days and nights

Eventually the mist is getting clearer
I can see through the prism of life this "Someone"

"Someone" is knocking at the eyelids
To see his own image in my eyes

Holding moonbeam in palms
"Someone" is approaching to spread the happiness

In afternoons' scorching sun
"Someone" is making me wet with shower of love

In proximity where breath is shared between body
"Someone" is making me shed my childhood plays

And I am writing this poem as if
"Someone" is dictating me with passion.

Thursday, November 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 13 November 2015

This SOMEONE is so beautiful................Asim 10+

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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

We can only feel this 'someone' but never know who it is... A wonderful feeling that you represent wonderfully in a poem of nine couplets... Thanks Asim.10 :)

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

someone gives you a 10 thanks Asim

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 November 2015

Someone is writing comments by reading your poem and something is the reward for this someone.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2015

Someone with flying mind hear expresses love as someone is looking good in this interesting imagery. Being someone and writing this poem to witness is definitely wise expression....10

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