M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,672 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Someone - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

With the string of eyes
“Someone” is flying my heart like kite…

In this unknown world
“Someone” is looking like gold

Thoughts hardly used to cross my mind
Now “Someone” is making it pass between days and nights

Eventually the mist is getting clearer
I can see through the prism of life this “Someone”

“Someone” is knocking at the eyelids
To see his own image in my eyes

Holding moonbeam in palms
“Someone” is approaching to spread the happiness

In afternoons’ scorching sun
“Someone” is making me wet with shower of love

In proximity where breath is shared between body
“Someone” is making me shed my childhood plays

And I am writing this poem as if
“Someone” is dictating me with passion.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Couplet


Poet's Notes about The Poem

कोई

नैनों की डोरी से दिल की पतंग उड़ा रहा है 'कोई'
इस अंजनी दुनिया में अपना नज़र आ रहा है 'कोई '

ख्याल नहीं आते थे रातों को भी कभी
अब तो सूरज की रोशनी में सुला रहा है 'कोई'

धीरे धीरे कोहरा चाटता जा रहा है
'कोई ' रही जैसे पास आ रहा है

अब तो पलकों की चिलमन का द्वार जैसे खटका रहा है 'कोई'
इस अंजनी दुनिया में अपना सा नज़र आ रहा है 'कोई'

हथेली में चांदनी लिए
ज़िन्दगी को फरहा करने आ रहा है 'कोई'

चिलमिलती धुप में बरसात का एहसास करा रहा है 'कोई'
बचकानी हरकतों पर रोक लगा रहा है 'कोई'

पास आकर गुड-गुदा कर एक कमरा अपना
स्थायी बना रहा है 'कोई'

एक पागल दिल लगाकर, कलम चलकर ये सब लिखता जा रहा है
जैसे ये सब बातें इसको बतला रहा है 'कोई'

Comments about Someone by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/13/2015 9:16:00 AM)


    This SOMEONE is so beautiful................Asim 10+ (Report) Reply

    3 person liked.
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  • Souren Mondal (11/12/2015 7:42:00 AM)


    We can only feel this 'someone' but never know who it is... A wonderful feeling that you represent wonderfully in a poem of nine couplets... Thanks Asim.10 :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2015 6:19:00 AM)


    someone gives you a 10
    thanks Asim
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  • (11/12/2015 5:48:00 AM)


    Someone is writing comments by reading your poem and something is the reward for this someone. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/12/2015 4:55:00 AM)


    Someone with flying mind hear expresses love as someone is looking good in this interesting imagery. Being someone and writing this poem to witness is definitely wise expression....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 12, 2015


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