Some Thoughts - 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Some Thoughts - 1

Rating: 4.7

They say wise men speak seldom
How would they know the speech is silver?

When few words can leave a lasting impact
Why speak more and spend gold coins?

A minutes silence is more precious
When loudspeakers are on for hours

Bubbles are for few seconds only
Then they become part of the water

Floating is better than splashes
Stability in life is a sign of continuity.

Sunday, January 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,thoughts
Mahtab Bangalee 20 January 2019

its great and thoughtful poem- Stability in life is a sign of continuity // love it

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 January 2019

I am glad I had the chance to read this poem! It has the deep wisdom of ancient sages, and the visual imagery of the modern age! A great poem which adds to the saying: Silence is gold. To my favorites' list!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 January 2019

Silence of a moment is much more precious and we shall feel peace at this moment. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2019

Ashes, Lashes, clashes! Floating is better than splashes! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 20 January 2019

A nice thought content in the poem.An inspiring write.

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Deepak S S 13 August 2020

Full of wisdom. This is my favourite now....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2019

A wonderful couplet! i would love to quote the ending, Floating is better than splashes/Stability in life is a sign of continuity....Excellent work my friend....10

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Deepak S S 20 January 2019

Sign of continuity is what life is. Keep walking until life walks over A thoughtful poem even with random thoughts.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 January 2019

Wise men speak but after a lot of listening. Asim Nehal is always thoughtful.

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S H 20 January 2019

Random thoughts nicely written.

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