David Wood

Gold Star - 13,800 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

Sonnet 6: Unrequited Love

Poem by David Wood

Oh those lips that Love designed for kissing
Are of such beauty and so soft to kiss.
Yet Cupid’s arrow fired but keeps missing
Our paths seldom cross and do often miss.
I sometimes do view you dear from afar,
From my seat in the town square I see thee.
I pray you keep the door to your heart ajar
For Cupid’s arrow to fly straight from me.
But I see you with another bright flame
Strolling through the town, your sweet hearts delight.
I have yet to know my heart rivals name
To challenge him to a duel, a lovers fight.
Yet to hate him is wrong, I must succumb
And wait for love to die, and hearts to numb.

Comments about Sonnet 6: Unrequited Love by David Wood

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (5/22/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    A supreme sonnet on unrequited love with love and passion flowing! The last two lines transcends all and sums up your goodness which out-classes even the heart felt love, David!(Report)Reply

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (5/22/2013 12:12:00 AM)

    A poem charged with emotion! ! The pangs of unrequited love, though painful donot take the tone sadness or vegeance! ! A very beautiful sonnet! !(Report)Reply

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  • Captain CurCaptain Cur (5/21/2013 2:16:00 PM)

    Flows beautifully. Sometimes better to dodge cupids arrow.(Report)Reply

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  • Paul BrookesPaul Brookes (5/21/2013 1:13:00 AM)

    Ah she I love another loves All to me is left dark sighing. Such is unrequited love. Well written poem about the sadness and emotions of love not returned. BB : O)(Report)Reply

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  • Valerie DohrenValerie Dohren (5/20/2013 1:07:00 PM)

    Another fine sonnet - a great read.(Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Colon (5/20/2013 12:01:00 PM)

    I read your Sonnet VII first and loved it, but this is another winner! Don't stop writing. Please!(Report)Reply

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  • Aftab Alam KhursheedAftab Alam Khursheed (5/20/2013 8:04:00 AM)

    Unrequited Love, another lovely sonnet both deserve to be 10(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013