Sonnet Vi-The Fantasy Of My Dreams Poem by Yash Shinde

Sonnet Vi-The Fantasy Of My Dreams

Rating: 5.0


I saw her as she
moved down the sky
her glittering face
I captured in my eye…………………

She touched me with softly
With her seraph hands
and softly drifted over the barren glebe,
building a paradise on arid sand………………..

And I searched her
As she hid behind the stars
Tried to catch her
Before, she could go far…………………….

But the blaze of the sun scorched my paradise
And my fantasy disappeared as I opened my eyes………………………….



Copyright © Yash Shinde 2012

Monday, October 15, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 18 October 2012

A very lyrical write. Great work. Fine balane of mood and language.

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Heather Wilson 18 October 2012

A beautiful poem, great imagination.

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Neela Nath Das 17 October 2012

Very nice. well rhymed and the eagerness for her made this poem a dream-poem.

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Sanjay Mehta 17 October 2012

Musical isn't it. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing

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Hazel Durham 16 October 2012

Wonderful imagery, so original, great write!

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Akhtar Jawad 23 October 2014

A beautiful dream in a beautiful poem.....................10

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amazing. Showing beautiful imagery. I love and enjoy reading this poem. Fantastic Job! (:

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Valsa George 21 March 2014

Lost in a dream land.....! You have beautifully presented your fantasy, Yash!

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Yash Shinde 19 March 2014

Thanks everyone for your appreciation and feedback- Yash Shinde

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Anonymous Sharma 10 November 2013

this is very good i especially like the ending!

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