I saw her as she
moved down the sky
her glittering face
I captured in my eye…………………
She touched me with softly
With her seraph hands
and softly drifted over the barren glebe,
building a paradise on arid sand………………..
And I searched her
As she hid behind the stars
Tried to catch her
Before, she could go far…………………….
But the blaze of the sun scorched my paradise
And my fantasy disappeared as I opened my eyes………………………….
Copyright © Yash Shinde 2012
A very lyrical write. Great work. Fine balane of mood and language.
You Rock ! I loved your poem very much and enjoyed every line! i can imagine that what happened as a nice poem should do to the reader! :) keep smiling!
And I searched her As she hid behind the stars Tried to catch her Before, she could go far is this my fav line..lil keep it write i like ur new style go ahead...
amazing. Showing beautiful imagery. I love and enjoy reading this poem. Fantastic Job! (:
Lost in a dream land.....! You have beautifully presented your fantasy, Yash!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem, great imagination.