Sonnet I-Searching Eyes Poem by Yash Shinde

Very nice and the style of writing is fabulous. Loved your poem. write more plz.

Fantastic...love the verses... go for more.. and try different subjects as well..Good job!

A great poem, like it.

Interesting piece and i am amazed at how few years you have been on this earth to write with such good wording and meaning...the third stanza to me struggled a bit but other than that a good read.... tyvm

keep it up, u got a real talent experiment and keep the flow

'in the midst of solitude eyes seek his glance....' - beautiful lines. A lover's see nothing but beauty.

heart touching poem...really a lovely write

Fabulous poem from your pen. Eyes keeps on searching till they are not standstill. Loved it. I am surprised to see the date as Oct...2012...

In Vaisnav Padabali there's those lines- - - - - - - - Crow, eat my body, but don't eat my eyes.Because, thru them I''ll see Sree Krishna! Recently, a Bollywood Hindi song was written on the same thing.Actually, this an age-old lyric from a Maithil poet.Yash, has penned the theme wonderfully.

Kaga sab tan khaio are famous lines from classical Hindi literature. It's not my lines. Many poets have used these lines. I haven't used it in any poem but my comments on your poem.