Soul Needs Rhapsody! Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Soul Needs Rhapsody!

Rating: 3.5

Remembering you tonight ….
Recalling so many stuffs about our past
What are you doing now just..

You must be comforting your mate on your chaste
In this frozen winter night
That would be the best…..

Winter wind gusting heavily on my place too
And m trying to warm myself with a fleece blanket
But my frozen heart needs a bit more
It stuck still on the same old docket

Garments can gives comfort to our body
But soul needs bliss..soul needs rhapsody!

Kanav Justa 17 December 2013

~Garments can gives comfort to our body But soul needs bliss..soul needs rhapsody , , , love those lines, , , ~ its a very poigant write, , , loved it completely, ,

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 December 2013

Only true love can give solace to the heart.Agreed.Keep inking Ruby.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 December 2013

whether the body needs rhapsody or the soul needs the ecstasy is not my concern, but the tenderness in this poem really captures..

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Roseann Shawiak 22 December 2013

Memories help warm the mind, but our hearts need love through blissful rhapsodies, they need to be touched gently through our souls. Wonderful poem, intense feelings. Thank you for sharing.

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Yasmin Khan 18 December 2013

A poignant and passionate write...soul needs bliss and warmth of love, no doubt.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 17 December 2013

rupture of soul.. may be find rhapsody at moonlit.. nice poem.. i liked it..10/10

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