Spectral Verses, I, The Twilight And The Gloom Poem by Captain Cur

Spectral Verses, I, The Twilight And The Gloom

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What fair voice calls my name as I loiter in the grave
a poet now besieged with ignoble repartee,
death is just a misty cloud that hides the quilted waves
patterns of the fickle tides that charge then run away.
In my youth I sang great chants, my verse would never sway
banished from my native soil I sailed to war with fate,
hearing echoes from my past I fought in unknown bays
hoping for a hero's death my sins to mitigate.
Alas! No peace, no resting place, unsettling as the moon
where my spirit walks between the twilight and the gloom.

Friday, April 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: death,fate,hero
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A most valued pirate and I
were discussing Lord Byron
and this poem was composed.
I was encouraged to share it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 19 April 2013

Like a sword this poem is, it strong, and sharp...sharper when somebody know how to keep it right...and you keep it better with words you made it stronger..amazing my captain_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 14 April 2013

Hope you find your peace CC - excellent write.

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Shahzia Batool 14 April 2013

A new kind of terror...the most wanted and longed for, which people don't escape rather seek for it! ! !

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