Speech Unconstrained Poem by Indira Renganathan

Speech Unconstrained

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When your first speech was applauded
Sky high you began to aim
For a place among the far stars

Messaging usefully
You spoke, spoke, spoke
And spoke and overdone

Who cares about your racing
To marry the moon..
Of course the moon doesn't

A parched throat
With a cracked voice
Where does the beauty lie

'A friend's frown is better than
a fool's smile'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 15 August 2022

Awesome, I quote ' A friend's frown is better than a fool's smile'...Full ****

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Even the first three Iines are catching.we all aim for a place among the stars

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Bharati Nayak 13 August 2022

Let me quote, 'Who cares about your racing To marry the moon.. Of course the moon doesn't A parched throat With a cracked voice Where does the beauty lie'

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Bharati Nayak 13 August 2022

A wonderful poem that speaks how sometimes we get befooled by our desire to reach unrealistic goals.We run after mirage and get frustrated at the end.

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Chinedu Dike 13 August 2022

Deep and exquisitely penned is this insightful creation of yours. Great lines nicely put together with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Madam. Remain enriched.

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