Spent Time - Ξοδεμένος Χρόνος Hay(Na) Ku Poem by Kostas Lagos

Spent Time - Ξοδεμένος Χρόνος Hay(Na) Ku

Rating: 5.0


Creatively

Spent time

Making my coffin



Δημιουργικά

Ξοδεμένος χρόνος

Στο φέρετρό μου

Monday, November 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,death,humour
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love making hay(na) kus. A form of short poetry from the Philippines.Based on the haiku form of poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 24 November 2020

Sorry but not a haiku form. Haiku is about nature and syllable form 5-7-5 in each line.... sorry mentioning here. Creative aspect Fill every cell within me Design my coffin.....not Haiku... senryu.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 November 2020

Death is indeed a humor for wise persons. Beautifully brief. Five stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2020

Interesting and intriguing creation. Creativeness is better than indolence. The time has been spent productively. Wonderful hay(na) ku.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 November 2020

Its great and small. An elegy haiku? Making your own coffin in case you start coughing with Covid though morbid must be fun in the sun

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