Stained Comments

She sad there crying Shaking from the inside Sad, very sad....

Poet captured all vital moves of the loser, just like the way a camera captures an object, to tell the story naturally and sensationally. This is the cleverness of the LR has exhibited. Wonderful. LR deserves full marks Congrats for being he members PoD.

She is waiting at the window expecting that her love would return. But the scar is there that will remain for forever. Sad and true. Very nice poem and congrats.

Crying! ! Thanks for sharing.

nice poem about heartache and the damage it leaves behind.

Very well articulated poem. The pain of a broken heart nicely portrayed. Even if there is re-union, it will never be the same- stains will remain. Thanks for sharing the poem. While her heart was screaming / All the love she ever knew Gone.... As if a doll / She sat there crying

Interesting poem....... congrats, Leah, on being selected for the day......

You've captured and wrote beautifully what losing something very dear, that you hold on too like a treasure - precious piece of jewellery suddenly is gone. Yes even though it comes back you're not the same. I liked it very much not because it resonates with me but in the way abled to express yourself in so many little words. Well done, you.

Hi Leah, Nice one. Clearly articulating the agony of loss, separation.. The scar it leaves on you...

Congratulations, Leah, for having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day!