Southern wind rushes past the bamboo trees
The moon is not within the sight and darkness deepens
From the depth of the nature emerged a music
Melodious and familiar to the ears
The unheard song removed the gloom and sorrow
And the love reached the heart through the eyes
And the hard knots of thoughts,let loose the wishes
The smell of the woods narrated the broken-heart's story
Far from being perfect they recount those sweet ecstasies
Time cut through the moon like the sword
And the night began to burn as the sun emerged
From the starless night that passed silently.
very beautiful so very lovely is your love poetry that's why now you don't now read me it's okay by me MAN as long as others enjoy equally
It feels good to read this poem again: it has a certain depth of signification, when read with a clearer mind, and from a different emotional perspective.
The unheard song removed the gloom and sorrow And the love reached the heart through the eyes... These two lines I picked here, but there is lovely poetry all thru. Beautiful write
We never cease to wonder at the numerous manifestations of Nature, of the Universe, of coincidences, of projections...this poem emerges as an unification of the previous thoughts, sentiments, perceptions I felt...so strange...love the poem!
The unheard song removed the gloom and sorrow And the love reached the heart through the eyes.............your words in these two lines I cited. You conjure here magic and there is so much to enjoy in this brilliant poem. If we read this impressive poem time and again, so much more beauty it gaines. Wonderous words. A 10 Full Score for this gorgeous poem.
Sterling imagery. The words radiate light though the night is starless. A poem that gives immense poetic delight. A big 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The unheard song removed the gloom and sorrow And the love reached the heart through the eyes And the hard knots of thoughts, let loose the wishes The smell of the woods narrated the broken-heart's story.....haunting expression. This is really a beautiful poem on love, nature and dream with nice penmanship on a philosophical base. Thank you dear Asim for sharing this gem.10