Zen Bojczuk

Rookie (Philadelphia, PA. USA)

Starred Deeply Into My Eyes - Poem by Zen Bojczuk

She was so lovely
Starred deeply into my eyes
Asked me to follow

With blurry vision
I watched her swaying silk walk
Followed where she led

A small dim lit room
She wanted eyes to reveal
To see more clearly

But, not with just me.
Its her profession ~ she's my
ophthalmologist


Comments about Starred Deeply Into My Eyes by Zen Bojczuk

  • (9/27/2007 5:39:00 AM)

    Zennnnnnn! ! ! ! ! ! You really teased us with this one! Very clever penning...HG: -) xx (Report)Reply

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  • (9/25/2007 11:22:00 PM)

    A clincher in the end... well done! (Report)Reply

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  • Elysabeth Faslund (9/25/2007 2:57:00 PM)

    Oh, yeah...you're good! If you love a poem with a surprise ending, read this one! Good, goodest! xxElysabeth (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 11, 2011


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