Starter Poem by Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari

Starter

Rating: 5.0


The story begins not today
It neither occurred in the past
Nor it would ever start

It is just a man’s dream
It is only an individual’s quest
It is not a shared delusion
It is merely one man’s notion

Still it pierces the skies above
Still it touches the depths of oceans
Still it travels the un-trodden paths
Still it creeps in the disabled minds

The verse is ambiguous yet crystal
The word is plain yet enigmatic
The picture is blurred yet three dimensional
The thought is juvenile yet profound

What else you’re craving for?
This is just a starter
And it’s surely mouth-watering
Though little sour

Take it the way you like
It’s just a beginning of another end
There is a lot more to come your way


Jan 15,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehwih Umber 08 March 2009

Hello I have read a few poems of yours, they are nice and well written but the thing most of them lack is 'hope'. The reason is evident but the only thing that can change fate is 'prayer'. Pray with depth and with faith and you will get want. Regards

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Aijaz Asif 20 January 2009

a marvellous write kamran bhai and yes the etarters are like this but i'm not sure that am i the starter or my end is near? ? ? ? anyways it is a very beautiful write with good messages, an inspiring piece...thanks for sharing 10+++++++ and A++++ rgds asif

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Seema Aarella 19 January 2009

Beautiful write kamran, Exactly starters are like this.....never reachable to our imaginations, the silent blossomming of a night flower, in total secrecy, mysterious, untouched, but sought after with zeal, what else could take shape in the hollowness of mind, in the abyss of heart, in the depths of eyes.....it keeps me wondering! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 January 2009

Wow....amazing thoughts my friend.It could be somethin religious, divinity, heavenly love or anythin miricalous that grips mankind existence.Great piece bro.

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Indira Babbellapati 18 January 2009

waiting for the main course...! ! ! ! ! ! !

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