States Of Mind Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

States Of Mind

Rating: 4.9


Frustrated

I felt frustrated
As I saw you
Walking down the road
With the handsome man,
My best friend
Once upon a time.
I still feel the pain
When you ignored my love,
And walked away,
Holding his strong hand,
I don't know whether
You are my biggest enemy
Or is he the one!


Terrified

I felt terrified
As I saw you
Clinging to my best friend,
Enveloping him
With your sadistic pleasures,
Making him move away
From my life
And leaving me alone
Crying in this darkness
Thus paining my soul,
And eating me up
Like an ugly devil.


Sad

I felt sad
When you did not feel
My words of passion,
My expressions of deepest love
Which were always there
Preserved in my heart
Only for you,
As you tore down the paper
Which depicted my blissful thoughts
Waiting to embrace you.


Happy

I felt happy,
When you walked out of my life
To open your doors
For a newer horizon
I felt contented,
And elated
As I realised then,
You will be merrier
Seeing a bright new expression
Than always glancing at my half burnt face
After that disastrous flame
Changed me into an ugly person.
But always will be happier,
Treasuring my love for you
In my heart, forever..

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanveer Sharma 16 November 2012

simply amazing composition

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Maggie Munro 15 November 2012

Noble progression of sentiments encapsulated in this piece. Well done.

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Sara 14 November 2012

Great poem! Situations never only ever fixate on one emotion; its EVERY emotion in the spectrum. This was a very good write (:

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Maria Paz Samelo 10 November 2012

wow! ! great composition friend Indranil..I like it.. good luck to all your poems. Have a nice day.

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Joe No 10 November 2012

thank for your kind words about my poem dust, and i must say your poems about love hit the mark for me. joe

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Rendered in the perspective of a poet with gravity of matter truamatic to many. Well executed Mr Indrani.

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Sanjay Mehta 16 December 2012

Life is to be enjoyed, not endured. Finding joy even in parting of one's beloved implies that only the positive aspects are being given priority, its great. An saying goes, If you don't know where you are going the road will take you there.

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Jessica Lee 16 December 2012

Everything is very well written and emotional, it all ties in very well C:

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Rishit Desai 30 November 2012

Emotions are well expressed.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 29 November 2012

Well written..and well composed..very emotive and creative..

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