Sahaj Sabharwal

Rookie - 464 Points (17/03/2002 / Jammu city, Jammu and Kashmir, India)

Stay Cool - Poem by Sahaj Sabharwal

STAY COOL (Poetic Rap)

Stay cool,
Don't be a fool,
Just like a mule,
Are you a dull stool?

Never be in terror loon,
Or you will see an error soon.

Do something new,
Which is done by a few.

Always be in mood,
Your attitude should never be rude,
As adviced by Sahaj, my dude.

Make your own rules,
Use them like necessary tools,
And consider your opposes as big fools,
Take proper rest till your mind cools.

-Sahaj Sabharwal
(Author of Book "Poems by Sahaj Sabharwal")
-Jammu city,
Jammu and Kashmir, India.
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Topic(s) of this poem: poem, rap, writing

Form: Rhyme Royal or Rime Royale


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Poem written and copyrighted by Sahaj Sabharwal

Comments about Stay Cool by Sahaj Sabharwal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/15/2020 9:19:00 PM)

    Stay with the truth! !
    Attitude and servitude;
    Doing the right thing! !
    Than being a terrorist.


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Michael Walker (1/15/2020 8:52:00 PM)

    You write impressive hip words and rhymes here, which I like. It's good to be cool and not
    a square. Like modern pop music and some rap. A good photo also.
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  • Chinedu Dike (1/15/2020 4:31:00 PM)

    Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched. (Report)Reply

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  • Kingsley Egbukole (1/15/2020 11:17:00 AM)

    An interesting poem, well composed. (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (1/15/2020 5:09:00 AM)

    be conscientious
    let the conscience come in the hand of deeds
    let the conscience come in the mind of activities
    let the conscience come in the temple of praying
    let the conscience come in the page of holy book reciting
    let you come to be the one love, to be the conscientious.....///
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (1/15/2020 5:04:00 AM)

    Very interesting poem. Enjoyed. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (1/15/2020 3:10:00 AM)

    A fascinating poem of the day.
    Congrats on your featured piece...10🤝
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  • Rajnish Manga (1/15/2020 2:09:00 AM)

    Quite an interesting poem. Insightful, too.
    Thanks.
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (1/15/2020 1:06:00 AM)

    Congratulations Sahaj for the poem of the day. I liked your title ' Stay cool'.
    A poem that is sweet in Rhyme Royal with a clear message of peace.
    A full vote for you, dear young Poet......10
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  • Sahaj Sabharwal (1/6/2020 6:42:00 AM)

    #POEMSBYSAHAJSABHARWAL #JAMMU #INDIA #STAYCOOL (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 6, 2020



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