Stiletto Poem by M.J. Lemon
Stiletto
Tall slender bronze
while you spoke
about your shoe
I thought
only
of
U
.
.
.
I thought only of You. Romantic brilliance, indeed! Thanks Mark for this lovely poem.5 stars
I see the height of the stiletto. And I desire the magnitude of life and love! Another excellent write, M.J.
i was thinking of what to say about the shape of the poem; Simone saved me time. tall slender bronze? ? ? a woman? does the topic concrete refer to dried cement? is the TSB a bronze statue on a concrete pedestal? a TALKING, SHOE-WIELDING OR SHOE-WEARING woman? ? ? CUTE. bri ;)
Thanks Bri! It is definitely about a woman..and a good call...yep, there is a metaphor about pedestals....Concrete poetry is for the form, type. Concrete poems convey at least part of their meaning through visuals...
A wonderful example of a struggle to keep focused on the conversation when ones thoughts are pressing on other matters. Love the shoe shape of the poem too.10
distraction is at the foot of this poem, in the shape of a bronze figure
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Lovely and superb. Short n sweet. Nice to read from your pen again, hapy new year.
Thank you so very much. And a Happy New Year to you!