Stop Thinking Poem by Sandra Feldman

Stop Thinking



Does thinking make you live?
I wonder if it does,
Sometimes I really wish,
My own thinking would stop,
Just to be very still,
In peace with mind and will,
Not even hear a drop,
Of water falling fine,
And wondering, as I stop,
Why is this drop not wine?

Friday, September 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 12 September 2015

Kelly gets to the heart of the matter, doesn't he? Every time we think we have our next decisive move planned, there's a glitch which makes us pause and wonder, Should I take this next step? It's Hamlet's crisis in TO BE OR NOT TO BE: Suicide will stop the pain we're feeling now, but what if it will just bring us to a new pain? The last four lines of your poem take us into a heightened region of a sense of wonder that there might still be hope for a kind of natural magic to intervene, with water becoming wine, at least in the Imagination. I'm willing to surrender my will to that saving hope.

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Kelly Kurt 11 September 2015

I waffle between wanting the constant thinking to stop, and fearing that it will.

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Chuy Amante 11 September 2015

the cessation of thought is where YOU are found no more madness where realness is unbound! ! !

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