Tuesday, October 10, 2023

Stop Worrying Comments

Rating: 4.8

My heart is weakening
For I am watching you there
In my mind
The memories haunt me,
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Kim Barney 13 October 2023

A nice poem involving a bit of mystery. Whom are you watching in your mind? Good work.

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M.J. Lemon 12 October 2023

That last line is really brilliant. Depending on how it's taken, it can give this verse a vibe of despair, or a tone of optimism and hope. Excellent verse, LeeAnn,

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Kingsley Egbukole 12 October 2023

Sounds like a failed love. It can truly weaken the heart.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 October 2023

Your wonderful poem is so inspiring in its positivity, LeeAnn.

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Kingsley Egbukole 10 October 2023

Keeping an eye on each other. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing

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Aarzoo Mehek 10 October 2023

Very very touchy poem

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Anjandev Roy 10 October 2023

Excellent short work.....thank u.... LeeAnn..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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