My heart is weakening
For I am watching you there
In my mind
The memories haunt me,
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That last line is really brilliant. Depending on how it's taken, it can give this verse a vibe of despair, or a tone of optimism and hope. Excellent verse, LeeAnn,
Sounds like a failed love. It can truly weaken the heart.
Your wonderful poem is so inspiring in its positivity, LeeAnn.
Keeping an eye on each other. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing
A nice poem involving a bit of mystery. Whom are you watching in your mind? Good work.