KEEP IN SOUL SLOT
Ms. Nivedita
UK
December 14th 2009.
Tip top
Rose pot
Love dot
Romance spot.
Break all block
In heart lock.
I’m caught
Coalesce n’ clot
Take snap shot
Lo get you got.
As an ought
Swap all allot
Store in soul slot
Love you lot
I’m hot shot
Forget me not.
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How romantic! 'I've stored all the beautiful rhyming words in my 'soul Slot' Good job Niv a 10+++
I am caught in a snap shot of soul slot. The hot shot on the romance spot has caused a heart lock.
I'm hot shot, forget me not! ! wow...incredible, its not just that its poetry, it is also, words to live by everyday! Good job. totally love this poem
Heyy, i Love the way you described your poem in a very detailed way, sorry i couldn't reply earlier as i didn't have time to go on the computer PS. Keep up the good work, n Write till you dropp ;)
A great work! ! ! You have fabulous technique of expressing hidden emotions. keep it up. God bless you.10/10
Poetry and music as one. So cleverly done and whimsical. It's very uplifting and great placement of words. Last line 'I'm hot shot, forget me not' great way to end it. Beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! ! Excellent emotional rhyming… ‘I’m caught/Coalesce n’ clot’ …nice metaphor ‘clot’ and ‘coalescing’ 14 Yeah such a lover must be in ‘Soul Slot’…beaus are desperate to get such lolol 10++