Strife Poem by P A NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P A NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P A NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India

Strife

Rating: 4.7


The breeze kisses tenderly
the alluring leaves again,
the swaying grass nearby
hears the rhyming verses,
the stars dance in the stream
that flows down the hillside
in between apple trees,
the moonlight alights gently
on the white cover of the valley,
shadows go down for a treat
with the starry night
but some perverted minds
go with their sharpened
knives again
to make a bloodstain
on the dancing stars-
concord and discord.

Strife
Wednesday, July 30, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anong All 30 July 2008

nice poem, soft and gentle

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

very very nice........well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

A lovely emotional compostion of dream.10 for it.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 12 August 2008

you and i in nature personified...lovely write! ! !

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Rema Prasanna 04 August 2008

nice poem...good to read.. it is a good work Noushad.. nature perfect 10 Rema

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Kesav Easwaran 04 August 2008

merging moods with colourful butterflies...from start to end the poem follows their flying wings...good poem this...10

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PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
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