Stupid Poem by Stevie Taite

Stupid

Rating: 4.3


I'm pretty dumb but my muse is much brighter
It seems that the strangest of things can excite her
If she gets dusty I give her a shaking
But it was just flour from where she's been baking.
When she is sad she's a dour alcoholic
She slumps in a corner and wines for her tonic
When she is happy she's contagious like giggles
She flounces around with her hair in cute pig tails.
She rarely gets caught as she steels through my senses
And fashions her fancies with
their consequences.
I'm glad she feels safe but I wish she'd stay put
I could sure use her help with this 'stupid' I've got.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm not completely stupid but I lack a good memory and have a shallow capacity for the really important stuff that goes on in the world! I am learning quite a bit through people's poems though!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Owusu 23 January 2013

this for me was interesting poem wasn't 100% sure what it was bout till read your notes, a good write

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John Brown 04 February 2013

I like the sustitution of wines instead of whines... I presume this was intentional Stevie? Good poem.

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Valerie Dohren 24 January 2013

Your Muse does you proud Stevie - good to know what other people's Muses get up to! !

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Heather Wilson 23 January 2013

You do very well, I love reading your work, your muse must be shining very brightly, , Very few people (if any) can take on board all that goes on in this world, good, bad, (some very bad) , and indifferent.

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Nader Baheri 23 January 2013

the Muse expresses your tact in art.she would help all of us.wonderful written~nb

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Nader Baheri 23 January 2013

your Muse expresses your tact in art.i completely grab it.nice written~nb

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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