A near perfect face
Exuding a touch of grace
A Cleopatra-like long neck
Enhanced with delicate jewellery
A long flowing black gown
Falling loosely over the tall slim body
Long well manicured finger nails
Bright red painted toe tails
That is her style statement.
And a good one too.
No one knows who she is
Or from where she comes
But who cares
With her stunning good looks
She is always surrounded
By tall handsome wannabe guys
Craving her undivided attention
And eager to have her hanging on their arm
But will she or wont she
Make a final choice of a guy?
Or will she continue to play
The hard to get game?
Extremely nice portrait with your wordwork+++++10 but in these poor economic times she will have to marry for love thanks for the read regards uavanice1
Is it your statement for shaadi.com or jeevansaathi.com forums? Is it directing to your stances? Then i must say there are men far taller, wider and strengthier as British.We ruled the world all over and still ruling with colonies like Spikes(US-Brits) ....Saffas(South Africans) ...Kiwis and Kangaroos, in the east Hongkong(now in China after 2003) ...et al... What are you doing there in the country of craps? There are men beyond your limits of vision and imagination.... May be i start last but from there itself.... A 10+++++++++++ for you for making a platform for showing off masculinity.
I can dare say, you are faaaar better poet that Maya Angeola, in descirbing a woman. You never cross the limits of romantic levels to reach obsenity and your portrayal has been always very dignified, sweet and touching. Let people throw stones at me.............(Maya's fans) .........I don't care. You are the best. I tried a couple of poems A THING OF BEAUTY, HER SMILE, may be from a man's point of view, how he loooks at a beautiful woman. Your poems are very neat, exact and perfect.
Possibly she could become addicted to the attention. Has never been problem for yours truly. Haha, great story of a poem. I can just see the femme fatale in my line of vision.
On one hand you dazzle us with amazing beauty and on the other you point out the dark reality effectively showing us the two sides in the same stroke. The artistic talent in you has created such a picture that it almost overshadows the point you want to make. I'm having a hard time trying to clear that scene from my screen........10
Nicely-expressed, Sandra. The poem itself has a graceful style. :)
hi sandra its a very nice poem...deals with the folly of todays truisms.. thanx for giving us this beauty cheers
A true modern Cleopatra to ' launch a thousand ships'. Style is the woman and I love it. CP
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beauty has the power to play 'Who cares where she comes from' Very intelligent say... The look and the style, that rule. Its in the mind of the one who looks. Care only for the style and beauty then pay the price for it That's why its said a game a gamble. Good theme. Thank you dear poet.