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Sudden Movements

Rating: 3.0

My father's head has become a mystery to him.
We finally have something in common.
When he moves his head his eyes
get big as roses filled
with the commotion of spring.
Not long ago he was a man
who had tomato soup for lunch
and dusted with the earnestness
of a gun fight. Now he's a man
who sits at the table trying to breathe

in tiny bites. When they told him
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

he's pawned on his children as love.........so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem.

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Adrian Flett 04 August 2018

'with the commotion of spring' Such a fine look at how life unfolds and we never know what the future holds.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 August 2018

nice writings- Now he's a man who sits at the table trying to breathe in tiny bites. ....... Surgeons can fuse vertebrae, a welders art, and scrape the ring through which the soul-wires flow as a dentist would clean your teeth. //// Great art of self inner-side

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Savita Tyagi 04 August 2018

Beautifully penned. A sad situation dealt with love and tenderness. I think father would be most happy looking at hummingbird and freezing.......

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 August 2018

one turn of his head toward a hummingbird, wings keeping that brittle life afloat, ... pawned on his children as love. lovely poem, parent, hard work, life, children, family. now sitting and watching in silence......... but with a great fulfillment that his life is spent well......... lovely poem dear poet. tony

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Glen Kappy 04 August 2018

For me the first two lines make me smile, and I relate. Who of us is not, at times, a mystery to ourselves? Then follows the vivid description of his father’s condition. And, as I read it, there is compassion overall in this portrait which avoids being simplistic or sentimental—which I can relate to. For who of us has not had mixed feelings about a parent? -GK

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 August 2018

The life gives many surprises. Only love lasts forever. A nice poetry indeed.

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