Suicide's Not A Way Out! Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Suicide's Not A Way Out!

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When life seems all hopeless
still don't yah loose all scope of hope
for there's this thing dangling in the air
Reach out for God's sturdy rope.

For how sure can you be that
death will take you to a better fate?
What if you are plunged into a plight much worse
where there's no turning back at any rate!

You too haven't been impeccable and above all blame
that you wish for a perfect rosy life
The excuses for suicide are usually so lame
Better enjoy your share even in strife.

Donot friend, plan to commit this act
just to invoke another's pity and regret
The pity and regret will come and go
besides, it soothes no decomposed
and a large slice of life will go waste.

Why rush for the grave, for greater gloom
Suicide's ain't a way out fellow human friend
Pray a godless way not send you unto this doom
You haven't right to bring any life to its end.

And it's probable that all those years
that you now wish to recklessly discard in dust
have something bright ahead, look for a ray of hope
and extinguish it not if in God you trust!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 23 September 2012

Suicide is for weak people who are not able to face up with the life's problems and things in it's case you wrote this poem in a great and nice way well done.

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Sina Farajzadeh 23 September 2012

Well, I disagree. I don't have enough courage to commit suicide. But it's better than living with sorrow and pain in the world of suffer. Anyway, I guess you read Shakespeare's Hamlet, and if you didn't, you would like reading it. Specially the part that says: To be or not to be, this is the question. Because your ideas are exactly the same with him. Good luck.

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Dr Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani 19 September 2012

Beautiful. You are a Sufi. The only way out is to hold Allah's rope. Estatic or depressed this is there for all. Lovely. Bebo blessed.

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Isaac Yaw Osei 18 September 2012

Well, it's your mind that tricks you in believin And it's your heart that tricks u into stayin... And it's probable that all those years that you now... have something bright ahead (also on here still!) And like me, some will stay wait.

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Idris Elasha 15 September 2012

sui generis.suits life.

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Denis Mair 12 November 2019

That's really well said. I think faith gives you a solid overall view of life. As you say, YOU HAVEN'T RIGHT TO BRING ANY LIFE TO ITS END. There are rich implications in this statement. We were put into this world by a power beyond fathoming, for purposes we do not fully understand, so we cannot set ourselves up as judges over life.

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David Mclansky 23 May 2013

For those committing suicide, Before you jump from way up high, Before you take that final dive, You denude yourself of human pride;

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Sameera Alshaikh 12 March 2013

For how sure can you be that death will take you to a better fate? What if you are plunged into a plight much worse where there's no turning back at any rate! keep it up ;)

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Shahzia Batool 30 October 2012

This poem is a social service on your part, and a very substantial contribution to the society...

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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

great great message and motivation for those who have lost hope wonderful work grea work :)

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