Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 93,715 Points (1978 / India)

Summer Breeze - Poem by Rini Shibu

The summer breeze is at my door
Shedding  leaves across the floor
Dryness is creeping into my soul
And my heart is burning as a whole
Day is long as the sun fully controls
The sweat drop starts to roll
Summer breeze don't be harsh
Softly caress with your warmth

Topic(s) of this poem: summer, sun


Comments about Summer Breeze by Rini Shibu

  • (4/24/2018 1:15:00 AM)

    Hi Rini,
    In the hot (and sultry in Kerala) , summer, a little breeze is most welcome.

    Lovely poem.
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    (4/24/2018 1:37:00 AM)

    Kerala it's very humid..thanks

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  • (4/23/2018 12:38:00 AM)

    This is a very enjoyable poem about summer breeze. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/22/2018 9:23:00 AM)

    Softly caress with your warmth!

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (4/22/2018 4:21:00 AM)

    The summer breeze is now too hot, a moderate weather we all need. A nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/22/2018 2:03:00 AM)

    Dear friend Rini, such a well expressed lovely poem👍👍👍 (Report)Reply

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  • Practicing Poetess (4/21/2018 11:57:00 PM)

    A very beautiful poem, Rini!
    Hopefully the Summer Breeze will heed your words, and obey, and not be harsh!
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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/21/2018 11:43:00 PM)

    This beautiful poem traverses the seasonal changes stylishly. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 21, 2018

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 21, 2018


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