Sinking summer sun
Heart soaring on gleeful wings
Of the homeward birds
A beautiful haiku on summer sunset is being nicely executed. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided.10
Hi Nosheen, Very beautiful haiku. The setting summer sun itself is a wonderful experience, as if seen in a kaleidoscope. The beauty of the sunset is embellished by the image of the birds flying homeward, their wings “gleeful”... The glee comes from their expectations of reaching home for the night, simply. But, this image is yet more colourful; the brightness and tinges added by the evening sun to the feathers. Onlu Nosh can imagine this and express in so brief words.100+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
...A wonderful Haiku! Thanks for sharing....10
Much obliged sir Dillip