when our day breaks with light
our sun smiles and shines on us
making our world sunny and bright
warming our head and our toes
as we kiss winter cold goodbye!
After the hazy and chilly winter, with what excitement, everyone will be greeting Sun in all his glory! A sweet write!
You wrote this poem the same day as your ecological poem on widespread damage. I'm glad I could read this positive poem in tandem with the warning poem. We NEED to take pleasure and joy in nature so we don't despair. Abandoning hope won't help us or the next generation, but treasuring the wonders of the world will. So your voice is especially lyrical, keep singing the songs we need to hear. BTW thanks for the positive feedback on BETWEEN STONE AND STARS. I have to say I enjoy re-reading that poem myself. It speaks to me, and it has one of the best titles I've ever come up with. When I drive past the church I wrote it in, I just feel... good inside.
.sunlight gives new life, and nurtures God's creations..............lovely write.......
A short, sweet and sunshiny poem. Well done my friend!
so lovley feeling....10 yes sun is bright makes us to fight for our right with suvival delight
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A Shining sun of a poem. Brightly beaming my friend!