Suns & Moons Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Suns & Moons

Rating: 4.8


A horrible night
street lamps unlit
even the moon hides
a woman smiles.
searching a tavern
in between the sky and earth
a toothless smile of a ragged beggar
filled my thirst.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Short yet bold telling. Good write! ; D

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Duncan Wyllie 26 April 2006

Dear Nimal, this is a profound write and as in so many of your writes, it is filled with heartfelt sentiments and a unique style, Love Duncan

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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