Monday, April 15, 2013

Sunset Comments

Rating: 4.9

That glowing orb of yellow daffodil
Darkening from yellow to orange glow
From the west faint embers that thrill
A shimmering breeze that dips below
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David Wood
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Heather Wilkins 05 September 2013

a beautiful description of nature and its wonders

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Juan Olivarez 26 April 2013

Beautifully descriptive poem. Very nice.

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Amir Aizat 24 April 2013

beautiful scenery nicely put into words. beautiful poem. :)

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Walterrean Salley 22 April 2013

I can see it. What a beautiful sunset. And thanks for sharing such a lovely scene with us.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 21 April 2013

The lovely sun set is mirrored in your beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed it, David!

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Shahzia Batool 19 April 2013

The imagery of the sun is remarkably set, it reminds me of Keats description of the sun-god: His palace bright, Bastion'd with pyramids of glowing gold, And touch'd with shade of bronzed obelisks, Glar'd a blood-red through all its thousand courts, Arches, and domes, and fiery galleries; And all its curtains of Aurorian clouds....

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Lyn Pendleton 18 April 2013

Hi David, as much as I admire sunsets I tend to ignore the sun when possible.I sometimes have a strange phobia it will blow up the more I think about it, pay attention to it. HennyPenny syndrome or something. A wonderful write. I wish I could pick subjects so available. take care

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Kelvin Owusu 18 April 2013

Agreed with valerie this is a beautiful description of the sun truly a positive vibe nicely done

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Valerie Dohren 16 April 2013

A beautiful description of sunset David, very inspired.

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Xxxxxx Xxxxxxxxx 15 April 2013

A beautiful nature piece capturing a serene moment that so many of us take for granted. Very uplifting and so well written. Thanks for sharing.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 April 2013

A nice imagery 'sunset' yellow then orange, orbs now gone, very meaningful Mr.David Thank you (anapeastic start indicate the quick movement, so restlessness resides somewhere if I am not wrong then)

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Heyyou Boy 15 April 2013

A well written work. Enjoyed. Outstanding David!

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Gajanan Mishra 15 April 2013

Marks the end of today. thanks. good write.

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