Sunset- -2 Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Sunset- -2

Rating: 4.8


Sunk low on horizon
The sun says a sad goodbye
with a vow to return
after a night of stars' glitz and glam
in the middle of darkness
and the moon's walk
across the spacious heart of the sky
Unlike you, the sun returns
day after day
keeping his promise
You say, what can I do
I'm only human.

Nosheen Irfan © 2016

Sunset- -2
Wednesday, October 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 19 October 2016

Hi Nosheen, Another exquisite poem from you after a long time. The Sun God has always been a source of inspiration for man, from time immemorial- the Sun, as you have said, who returns everyday, keeping his promise. Ra the ancient Egyptian God. In Indian myths and old poetry, lotus flower is the lover of Sun God. and she closes her eyes, the moment sun sets, only greet him with a warm smile when he returns. And he always keeps his word! We are only human, and to err (by design) is human; we have 'no need to' keep our words! Great! ++100++

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Barry Middleton 05 October 2016

Two of my favorite topics = sunset and betrayal. Very well done.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2016

Inspiring, Keep moving and never give up is the real message.....One should take the lessons from nature, Nature, the Master and Teacher, A perfect 10++++

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Aarzoo Mehek 05 October 2016

The circle of life keeps moving with the nature..one more night and one more day, one more day filled with hope and one more night filled with grief... Yes you are right at the end of the day we are human with all our emotions. One more piece of heart touchy write up.100 +++ wiht a hug. Stay blessed girl.

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Lahore, Pakistan
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