Sunset Poem by Nosheen Irfan
Sunset
Golden rust horizon
marks the sinking sun
The mountains are touched
by a crimson shower
of departing glimmer
The fiery glow is dying
in the western sky
to disappear
in the black mystery
of the night.
A beautiful description of the most beautiful sun set ever seen or read, Nosheen. LOVED IT....10+++
Hi Nosheen, I have come across another poem by name Sunset in ph, by Ms Jafarinoor. Totally different from your write, but a should-read. I invite you to read it.
Thanku so much Krishnan for reading n giving very worthy comments. Yea sure i'll read the suggested poem. Would love to. Thanku for recommending me a fellow poet's work.
Hi Nosheen, golden rust horizon marks the sinking sun Fantastic image, bringing out the nature's extravaganza in full. Reminding me of a shloka from Kumaara Sambhavam by the great Kaalidasa: Noonam unnamati yajwanam pati Sharwarasya thamaso nishiddhaye Pundareekamukhi, poorva dingmukham Kaithakairiva rajobhiraavrutham (Original Sanskrit version) Shiv tells Parvathi, I am sure, moon is rising. The eastern horizon looks as if sprayed with the golden dust of Ketaka flower. I have to change 'Kaalidasa' in the ancient Indian saying, Upama Kalidaasasya to 'Nosheen Irfan'.
'Brevity is the soul of wit'................ S..U..C..C..I..N..C..T and S..W..E..E..T! Top marks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 6:39:20 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well done. Now I would have added an observer even if the observer was an animal. Something that links sentient life to the beauty you describe.
Yes Barry thats a good idea to give it a human connection.