My friend says, she's tired of her life
she has a child to fend for,
she can't pretend anymore
I hope she will try to survive.
Talking to her, to give her hope,
she grasps my hand, holding tight
I pray for her at night,
but it's up to her to cope.
Friend, when you're weak, I'll be strong
just remember why you are here.
There's enough oxygen to keep you alive.
Sometimes, situations can go wrong,
but optimism can change the atmosphere.
As for me, I keep on to strive...
Friendship. It's a clear theme here, your willingness to care, is a beautiful thing in itself.
I like this poem, , , to give hope for somone who is in distress is one of the best things but that cannot be expect from persons nowadays, , I think you're a generous woman and I appreciate your great mind for filling optimism in other woman though she is your friend ! ! ! Great write dear friend! ! ! 10+++
'Talking to her, to give her hope, she grasps my hand, holding tight I pray for her at night, but it's up to her to cope.' Give her hope simply by reading this poem umpteen times. That's it, energy gushes out. You have attained perfection with poem. I am this is the best poems of yours. I love the above quoted poetic lines. Just poet tick it in your heart! ha! ha! ha! Don't take all my smiles as they are too many share some with your friend....... :) :) :) Awesome write....
a very inspirational poem, one should never simply give up. remarkable poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like this poem..it gives hope and describes true friendship