Supportingeachother....X Poem by Lyn Paul

Supportingeachother....X

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You need to know
That Life is not about receiving
Its not about you
Its not about me
Its for growing
For giving
Making others see

To see we must work together
to help us grow
Its not about you,
Its about tomorrow
We must see what is wrong
Then make it right
We can't change it today
Or overnight

Yet if we start today...
We will gain today
You will be proud....
You found away
Know that life is not about money$$$,
And just receiving
Its about enjoying and giving
And achieving

Achieving together
And not just thinking of you
Supporting each other
In all that you do
Rewards will be gained
Along the way
From giving each.....
And Everyday

Thank you




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Supportingeachother....X
Sunday, October 20, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: change,friendship,giving,love and life,support
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 20 October 2013

A fine affirmation of selflessness and in that a satisfaction that is derived only from giving.

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Kanav Justa 19 December 2013

lovely message you give in your poems, , , 10 for the note you left: P

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Roseann Shawiak 13 December 2013

Great poem, I like it. It's in giving of ourselves that we come to know others. Sharing brings the world closer I think. Thank you for sharing. Thank you also for the wonderful comment on my poem: Jealousy Dissolves, I greatly appreciate it. RoseAnn

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2013

This is the best reminder to always stay in any hearts! great enough to me_Soul

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Hazel Durham 22 October 2013

To give is to rejoice at the gift of life to use our best qualities to do good in the world! Inspirational write!

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Valsa George 22 October 2013

We can't change it today or overnight Yet if we start today... we will gain today So very true! Life cannot be changed overnight, yet if we begin making small improvements, in course of time, it will bring in rampant results! Nice poem with a great message! !

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