Surf In My Eyes Poem by Rini Shibu
Surf In My Eyes
Dive into the ocean of my eyes
and surf into my life
Float into my dreams and
look into the world from my side
Capture the views of my sight
There is nothing much I have to hide
You will see the truth of life
And may drown in tears of joy
Or attacked by dangerous sharks
But in blink of my eyes days will pass by
You will reach the shore of sun shine and
Never blame for surfing in my Smoky eyes
This poem, as I comprehend, is an invitation of 'love' from somebody which she loves. The dream lover should be able to share the joys and sorrows of life. You have meticulously put this idea into your thought-provoking lines...wonderful.....
Hi Rini, Beautiful poem. : : Dive into the ocean of my eyes and surf into my life: : - An overt invitation into one's life. To share the life. Float into my dreams and look into the world from my side: : This is very important. To look at the life through one's angle is a very difficult task. But that is the way to understand one's point of view; one's approach to life: Capture the views of my sight There is nothing much I have to hide You will see the truth of life Very purposed, pointed write. Asking the reader to ponder; too see listen the version of story of the person on the other side of the fence. Love needs to be unconditional. For this, complete acceptance of the counter party is required. Very nice. Thank you Rini for sharing this lovely poem. A 100++
Thanks Unnikrishnan for reviewing this poem.. Your comments mean a lot to me..
You have beautiful eyes and more beautiful vision. Thanks Rini for the poem shared. 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 4:10:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A wonderful poem. Such zest.
Thanks Sophie...! !